Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible In scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some citizens in many countries think that searching scientific
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, and other business and academic world information are necessary, as they play an important role in human beings'
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, others think it is valuable to be shared as they take billions
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and
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. In my opinion, heading it can be
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to the government and scientists. Nowadays Searching the information
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become a fundamental requirement, as today's
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world is moving on upside trends and it
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many people to cope with those trends .
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, searching
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can increase the
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of nations and make it
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wider
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shared
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by
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moon scientists
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the
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decade, helped
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Farouk al Baize to go
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moon and he still learning from the
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doing until now
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the internet for free. He encourages youth to do it
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. Other people see that those
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took
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effort
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from the
senitists
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scientists
and many expenditures from the government
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so
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they must not be shared for free because both of them need to be
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submitted
for their
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.
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, when they
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they can continue on making other
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and continue the
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in countries.
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academic and
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universities
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research
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are not
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free,
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doctors and professors can continue making progress in those fields as they have the money to
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on it and they will not see that it is a waste of their
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and money. In conclusion,
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other believe that information
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much valuable to be shared as
government
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the government
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and scientists need
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justification
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for sharing it, other believe that searching
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increase the
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in
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the world, in my opinion heading it is better
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • information sharing
  • scientific research
  • business
  • academic world
  • advancement of knowledge
  • progress
  • collaboration
  • cross-disciplinary research
  • open access
  • democratization of information
  • transparency
  • credibility
  • intellectual property
  • security concerns
  • commercial interests
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