In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for Learning and taking responsibility. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

While

many people claim that

children

should not be engaged in any kind of paid work, others argue that it is valuable for them to experience different activities learning something from that. On the one hand, the main aspect

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children

's development is to keep them healthy,

whereas

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types of paid work might be

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dangerous for not only their physical health but

also

it affects

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apply

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mental health

for example

jobs as delivery

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in the building area are threatening for physical health where it is possible to get injuries to crash to someone

as a result

in any case parents should control in what ways their

children

is earning money.

On the other hand

, limiting

children

from

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by the reason of threats is not right as well, because attending in various communities has its own benefits,

such

as gaining working experience, creating the sense of what working is, but apart from that teenagers learn to communicate with other people, making new connections.

Besides

,

children

working will be more self-assured and responsible. Meanwhile, they will have their own money, which will teach kids to control them properly.

To sum up

, even though working for somebody is quite risky, I agree with the view that

children

should at least try to experience the working process.

Hence

, coming across diverse difficulties will sharpen

children

's ability to take crucial decisions in real life, which will aid them to become well-being in the future.