Many people think modern communication technology is having some negative effects on social relationships.

Many

people

think modern

communication

technology is having some negative effects on social relationships. Do you agree or disagree?

In

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the dawn of the 20th century, Information

technolgy

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technology

radically changed

way

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the way

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hummanity

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humanity

could

commuinicate

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communicate

and exchange information. Before

every one

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used computers and

smart phones

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smartphones

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,

people

communicated with one another using traditional methods

such

as letters,

telegraph

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telegraphs

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and

telephone

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telephones

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.

Now a days

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, when it comes to

communication

there are

plenthors

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plethora

plethoras

of tools at our disposal which can help

complete

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us complete

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our tasks. It is stated that some

people

belived

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believed

believe

using modern

commuication

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communication

technology can occured

negative

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a negative

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impact on Social

relationshsips

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relationships

.

However

, in my opinion ,

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I

belived

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believed

believe

that using new

communication

devices can

be have

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some positive

influnece

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influence

in

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on

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social relationships,

but

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apply

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negative impacts bring more

outweights

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outweighs

it's

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its

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merits. To

beign

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begin

with,

communication

technology, especially internet

communication

like social networking

webistes

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websites

and dating websites has created the path to

process

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the process

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of socializing.

Moreover

, Social networking websites enable

people

to easily keep in touch with family and friends,

whereas

dating

webistes

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websites

website

helps

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help

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the cmmuinity

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cmmuinity

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community

to find someone compatible to be in a relationship with. On the other, there are many

nagative

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negative

effects

has

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generated through modern

commuication

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communication

devices. Most

people

are

Social

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in Social

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Isolation

due to

using

high

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a high

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volume of new

commuication

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communication

methods

such

as

Face book

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Facebook

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, Instagram and many more. Nowadays, most

of

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companies are using social

network

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networks

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through

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online, but

this

can unexpectedly

led

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lead

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to Social Isolation. In some cases,many

of

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people

re

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are

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not closed

with

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to

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the real world,

therefore

due to

less social interaction

it

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apply

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can lead to

dpression

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depression

and feeling loneliness.For

an

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example

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,example

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Research has found that

,

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adult

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an adult

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who

describe

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describes

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them selve

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themselves

as

lonley

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lonely

has

docubled

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doubled

since society

involved

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with

morden

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modern

communication

system.

This

can directly have an effect on a human happiness level.

Furthermore

, implement of

new

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a new

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mechanism for

commuication

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communication

is a huge

treat

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threat

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for

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to

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children

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children's

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safety.

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present,most of the younger generation and kids are studying through computers and, mainly they are more

accessable

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accessible

to

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the internet

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internet

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. But

this

has

exposes

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exposed

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them to a number of risks including graphic

sexsual

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sexual

images,

online

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and online

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bullying, particularly networking sites.

For instance

, UNICEF has announced that during the

COVID 19

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COVID-19

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period

due to

high

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the high

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percentage of computer usage

between

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among

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children, online

abuses

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has

been

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increased by 20%.

To conclude

,

eventhough

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even though

new

commuication

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communication

systems give us

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the opportunitly

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opportunitly

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opportunities

to build

up

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apply

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the relationship

between

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over

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long

distance

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distances

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and get in touch with the world,

however

I agreed, there are many

adverce

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adverse

effect

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effects

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can

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that can

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be casued

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casued

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cause

caused

not

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by not

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close

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being close

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with

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the real world,

such

as

mentall

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mental

issues and

also

risk for child safety.