The chart shows the cost of three projects to sustainable local management in the next five years. The round chart shows four sectors of which are allocated to projects in the first year.

The chart shows the cost of three projects to sustainable local management in the next five years. The round chart shows four sectors of which are allocated to projects in the first year.
The chart shows the
cost
of three projects to sustainable local management in the next five years. The round chart shows four sectors
of
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which are allocated to projects in the first
year
. In general, the
cost
of the project in
South-east
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Asia exceeded expenditures more than Central America and West Africa, especially for wages in the first
year
. In East Asia, the
cost
of the first
year
is $30
million
. Meanwhile, West African and Central American projects
cost
$10.5
million
and 20
million
. These static data are projected to recover after 3 years when the total value in West Africa is $2.5
million
and for the next two
years
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it exceeds
to
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3.5
million
. And in Central America, the amount is 5
million
for the third
year
and
this
remains the same even after a
year
. Turning to the distribution of total
cost
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for the
year
,
it is clear that
most of the costs are spent on the payment of wages and is still 50%. And for training and office expenses reach equal proportions of 10%
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