The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data?

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data?
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The two pie graphs illustrate the nutritional consistency of Medium baked potato and macaroni. 
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, the two dinners have the largest percentage of carbohydrates and the macaroni is more than medium baked potato by about 17%. Looking at the charts for more detail, the
rate
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of protein in medium baked potato is 25 % ,
while
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the
rate
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of protein in macaroni is less by around 13%. Added to that, the
rate
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of glucose is the same as the
rate
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of protein in macarons about 15%.
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,
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • nutritional consistency
  • carbohydrates
  • proteins
  • fats
  • vitamins
  • minerals
  • fiber
  • proportion
  • component
  • pie graph
  • comparison
  • significant
  • balance
  • healthy
  • dietary choices
  • implications
  • absent
  • presence
  • macro-nutrients
  • micro-nutrients
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