You had a dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your fillings about the dinner. In your letter, you should include: Say what you enjoyed at the dinner Describe how you feel about his/her family Invite your friend and his family to your place

Dear Sukh, I hope you are doing well.I am writing

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letter to express my happiness and want to tell you about

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night which I spent with your family members. As

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had an amazing time with your parents.I was invited to the dinner at your dwelling place.

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,your mother prepared my favourite food items namely hakka noodles,spring rolls etcetera.Add to

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,the food was scrumptious and spicy as well.I was on top of the world

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having dinner at your home. I was extremely happy because your family did not make me feel bad.We

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did ample

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activities together.I really enjoyed their company.I created cherished moments with them.

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, they are great personalities. please do not say 'No'.I am inviting you and your family to lunch at my house.We will have great fun.As you are not very punctual so please come at a time. Have a great time ahead! Best regards, Navdeep Kaur

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Aug 16, 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

153 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

heartwarming experience
culinary delights
familial warmth
cordial atmosphere
intriguing conversations
reciprocal invitation
cultural exchange
personable interactions
memorable hospitality
fostering connections
warm welcome
thoughtful gestures
engaging discussions
positive impact
strengthen the bond

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?