The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
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The table compares the number of overseas tourists from 5 different
areas
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in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005.
It is clear that
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all five
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, including the totality, saw an increase in foreign arrivals over the course of 15 years, with the exception of a drop in America’s figures by 2005.
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Europe recorded the highest number of visitors outside the country each year, the Middle East and Africa welcomed a noticeably lower number of international visits than the remaining regions. Starting at the only figure out of 5
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above 250
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in 1990, Europe witnessed a significant rise by around 100
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visits in 5 following years, followed by a steady climb to 400.2
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foreigners a decade later. America and Asia and the Pacific both followed a similar upward trend, only to a much lesser extent.
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, America’s figures slightly fell to 113.2
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at the end
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of the period. The Middle East attracted the least international foreigners in the first year, with only 9.8
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. Africa was the second least popular destination whose figures roughly doubled that of the Middle East. Both regions saw a slow rise over the given years, up to 15.8 and 28.7
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respectively. The totality of visitors in all
areas
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climbed sharply from 448.9 to 615.2
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by 1995 and remained a gradual growth in the next decade.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "climb" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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