the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.

the map below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton , and planned future development of the site.
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The maps compare the current plan of an industrial neighbourhood in Norbiton with the
future
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plan of it when the desired changes have been done.
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, all manufacturies will be replaced by housing blocks.
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, because of the introduction of new facilities, the area is going to be a better place to live in. If we look at the current map, we can see a square in the centre of the area, which is surrounded by a considerable number of factories. To be more precise, eight manufacturies are placed there, and there are no other facilities in the neighbourhood. Looking at the
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plan, it is evident that all factories will be replaced by residential blocks.
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, around the current square, which will be preserved, several shops and a medical centre are going to be built. looking at the eastern side of
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town, a school is going to be introduced in the
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,
as well as
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a playground for children. Another interesting change is that a new road will be constructed, which connects the square with the northern side of the city, where a new housing area will be located. It is notable that the
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path will cross the river.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words future with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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