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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and tv crime dramas? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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In our society,
crime
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 is undeniably one of the most worrying and
prevaling
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prevailing
revealing
aspect
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 that brings negativity. Currently, there is a popularity in
crime
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 serials and
documentary
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documentaries
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 in various countries. The following paragraphs in the essay will explain the reasons to bring
crime
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 fiction
books
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 and
dramas
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 into popularity
along with
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 my humble opinion.
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 with, there are tremendous causes for the
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crime
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 novels and TV shows.
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,
books
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 and serial plays a critical and inherent role in everyone's life.
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rapid
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the rapid
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 growth of
population
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the population
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, crimes are
also
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 increasing. Not only do
documentary
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documentaries
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 broaden
the
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knowledge but
also
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 teach various ways to
an individuals
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individuals
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 to remain safe, away from misconduct. To illustrate, rape,
murders
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murder
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, and
harrasement
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harassment
 are common crimes in the modern world.
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, there
are
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number
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 of
books
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 and fiction
dramas
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bring
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that bring
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real life
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real-life
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 mishappening and ways to overcome
these critical situation
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this critical situation
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 among people.
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, in order to move with
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 lifestyle,
crime
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books
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, and
dramas
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 are famous among individuals. Moving towards
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my humble opinion related to
crime
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 fiction and
dramas
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.
According to
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instead
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 of wasting our precious time to do
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crime
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the crime
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, we can learn more about the consequences of misconduct that will assist the whole world to have a safe planet.
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, there are various people who
no
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not
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 only do
violence
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 activities with humans but
also
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 with wildlife that result
into
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in
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illegal
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an illegal
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act
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acts
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 that hampers the growth of an economy.
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, we should always utilise our time and
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per my
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 we should either read
crime
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 novels or watch
crime
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dramas
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.
To conclude
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,
books
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 and
dramas
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 related to criminology are becoming famous as various illegal activities are taking place in most countries and knowledge
provide
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 assistance to cope
up
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apply
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with illegal acts and change the mindset
individuals
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of individuals
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 to utilise their time and get rid of all
violence
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violent
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 activities.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • intriguing plot
  • suspense
  • immersive experience
  • well-developed characters
  • crime-solving techniques
  • legal procedures
  • psychological thrill
  • unraveling mysteries
  • societal issues
  • high-quality production values
  • well-crafted storyline
  • strong performances
  • engaging narrative
  • relatable dilemmas
  • thought-provoking content
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