The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In 1888, the first vehicle was driven on British streets. In 2000, there were about 29 million

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those

roads

. In order to

control

the usage and property of

this

means of transport, some people claim that alternative ways to commute should be promoted and international laws enacted.

This

essay aims to explain why I completely agree with

this

idea. The primary reason I have to support

this

statement is that it is

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difficult to

control

the

number

of

cars

on British

roads

with the existing legal frame. Despite the fact that some measures have been taken to reduce the amount of traffic, particularly during rush hours, those have been insufficient to tackle

this

issue. To exemplify

this

, think about the tolls that have been built in some avenues to persuade people to avoid using their

vehicles

during certain hours; many of them do not care about those tolls because if they need to drive somewhere, they are willing to pay extra to do it.

Furthermore

, having an excessive total of

vehicles

on the

roads

produces a dramatic amount of air pollution, unless electric

cars

are used.

It is clear that

the vast majority of

cars

in Britain are not of

this

type,

consequently

, the pollutants generated by them are big and worrisome. To ameliorate

this

panorama, I firmly believe that the government must enact some provisions aiming to

control

the

number

of

cars

that each person is allowed to own and

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usage since it will significantly diminish the

number

of

vehicles

on the

roads

.

Moreover

, the promotion of other forms of transport,

such

as bicycles and electric trains, should be internationally promoted, because they are eco-friendly. If

this

last

measure is taken in many countries, its impact

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the World’s environment will be profound.

To conclude

, I think that the British government has to regulate the usage and

number

of

cars

that people can have in the country and promote other means of transport that are more sustainable, to

control

the repercussions that

vehicles

are currently having in Britain. The latter measure would be better if it is agreed with other countries, to reproduce its benefits

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a bigger scale.