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Do you agree or disagree with following statement? Parents are the best teacher.

#parents #teacher
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It is commonly argued that mother and father are the best in teaching their child,
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 the other say that
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 still not the best teacher because of some factors. Personally, i can neither agree or disagree with
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 viewpoint for some variety of reasons. First of all, most people think that
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 are the best teacher in raising students,
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 means that mom and dad teach their children basic
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 skills, manners, behaviours and many more. In fact, these are the first lessons that children learn, not through
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, but from their
parents
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.
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: when a child is born, when they reach a certain age, they will be taught to crawl, walk, until they grow up able to talk like normal people. An obedient child is the one who is cared for by their
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. Another reason might be when parent teach them, they will have absolute trust in their
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 of outsiders, because we have a lot of contact with our
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, so it's obvious.
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, if
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 teach the children the basics,
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school
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 and society are the place to teach them knowledge and pratical lessons. One of the standard example is: me, when i was young, my mom taught me a lot about manners and behavours
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 my dad teach me about
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 skills. When i was old enough to get into elementary
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, all of the things my
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 taught, i have been applied it in my
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, like make friends with others... but
school
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 taught me a lot of knowledge for math, literature and english, from counting words, learning letters, learning to read to solve math problems, write and speak fluently, and when i interact in real
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, i learn many things that when my
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 or teachers say, i can't understand, only when i do, i can absorb the problems. In conclusions,
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 mother and father are good at teaching us basic things,
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 and society let us to expierience and learn the massive knowledges from the world.
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