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It is considered that many people that guidance is the first teacher of every child life to teach everything to make a better citizen, while others think that school is a building where students can learn skills and become responsible people in society. In this essay, l will present both sides of the argument, including why I believe that academic education is important to become a real member of civilisation.

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To be a nice and good person in a country one must have minimum knowledge to be civic and have some responsibility towards their city or country. So there are two ways to be a better citizen, one guidance, as in every child's life,
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is the first teacher to teach many things to be responsible and second
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 buildings, as it teaches not only to be responsible but
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statements.
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school
 because of many reasons, some reasons are,
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financial crises they have to earn and dropped the idea of going to
school
. There the guidance of their elders and seniors came to help and they have to on that path to be
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good people. For
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instance, suppose
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 and earn for his family, their
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guidance will help him to teach everything to make him a better citizen.
On the other hand
,
children
 who are going to
school
 have an advantage because teachers are there to guide them and correct them at every step.
School
 buildings are the place where
children
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effective methods and schools help to implement those techniques so that, they have an ease in the real world.
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, the basic responsibility of a responsible citizen is that
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 he should not litter the ground and make the environment clean. In schools students were taught to do so and the dustbins. In conclusion, both
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ways are good to teach
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. But in my ,opinion schools are better as they can teach much more than the person who is learning on his own.
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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