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The pie charts below show the age groups of the users on different social media platforms in Australia in 2011

The pie charts below show the age groups of the users on different social media platforms in Australia in 2011
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The pie charts give information about three different types of social media platforms that Australians in diverse age groups used in 2011.
According to
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 the first pie chart, the
users
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 of Facebook aged 18 - 34 constituted the largest percentage, at 29%. A slightly lower proportion of
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 for Facebook aged between 35 and 49, at 28%. What’s more, the figure for people in the over 50 age group accounted for less than a quarter of total
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 (24%), and the figure for those aged 10 - 17 was made up approximately
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 (19%). As we can see from the pie chart on YouTube,it generally looks similar to the first one. The percentage of
users
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 aged between 18 to 34 was still the highest
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, at 30%. Almost the same percentages of
users
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 aged 35 - 49 and
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 aged above 50, at 26% and 24% respectively. It can be seen that the number of Twitter
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 in the 35 - 49 age group was the largest compared with others (40%). The figure for those aged 10 - 34 represented about half of the Twitter
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, at 47% total.
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, people aged between 50 and 60 and over 65 just constituted marginal parts, at 9% and 4% respectively.
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, social media platforms were popular among the people in the 18 - 49 group in Australia,
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 the public aged over 50 were not particularly interested in those.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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