The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graphs show trends of electrical appliances in ownership and country spent time when they doing on housework in households from 1920 and 2019.
It is clear that
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spending in the amount of time in a household per week reduced gradually over the 100 years. In terms of the number of people,using, refrigerators and vacuum cleaners were significantly more popular than washing machines. In 1920, people spent hours around 50 per week on their household work. Their spending on household work decreased gradually over the 100 years, and by 2019 the average weekly hour had reduced to just over 10 hours. Looking at the percentage of households, in 1920 approximately 40 and 30 percentage people applied washing machines and vacuum cleaner
while
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, no one used in the refrigerator. The figures for refrigerator and vacuum cleaner usage remained relatively stable over the following 100 years.
By contrast
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, the application of washing machines almost increased, to nearly 75 per cent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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