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The chart below shows the proportions of adults in Canada who own one car, two cars, more than two cars, or who do not own a car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The provided
pie
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chart
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 gives data relating to
car
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 ownership in various categories, namely no
car
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, one
car
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,
two
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cars
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, and more than
two
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cars
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 in Canada. From an
overall
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 perspective, it can be seen that the major
proportion
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 of adults represents own one
car
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, whilst having more than
two
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cars
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 takes a little portion of the
pie
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chart
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. Looking at the statistics of the
pie
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chart
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 meticulously, it can be inferred that the majority of Canadian residents have one
car
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, depicting above 50%.
In contrast
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, having
two
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cars
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 shows one-fourth of the
pie
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chart
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, which accounts for just below 25%. It is noteworthy that owning no
car
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, and more than
two
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cars
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 illustrate the lowest indexes among other categories.
Furthermore
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, the citizen's
proportion
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 of Canada who does not have their own
car
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 displays around one-fifth of the
proportion
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,
while
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 the
proportion
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 of adult residents who have more than
two
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cars
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 shows just around 10%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, chart, car, two, cars, proportion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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