News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspaper. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? would it be better if more good news was reported.
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newspapers
report
global events for people
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reporters
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newspapers
television
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influences
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people's
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minds
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report
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for societly
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situations
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people
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conclusion
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