The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.
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The
pie
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chart
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illustrates information about the activities that students who graduated from one university did after their graduation. The table depicts the amount of those students’ income after five-year
work
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.
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, the
pie
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chart
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reveals that over half of anthropology students had full-time
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while
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just a little percentage of them had part-time
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and pursuing their higher education simultaneously.
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, the table shows that many anthropologists who worked in the federal section earned higher salaries
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a few percentages of those who worked in
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sector and worked as freelance consultants had low incomes. Regarding the
pie
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chart
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, the highest proportion of graduates had full-time
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with 59%.
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, only 8% of them allocated the whole of their time to study higher education, and with the same percentage, it is not clear what they have done after their graduation. There were 15% and 12% of graduates who had a part-time job and were unemployed, respectively,
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to 5% of them who worked part-time and studied postgrad at the same time.
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the
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and turning to the table, it can be seen that about half of anthropology students who worked as freelance consultants and worked in government sectors had higher than 100,000$ as a salary
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just 5% of them had a salary in a range between 25,000$ to 50,000$. About two-thirds of those who worked in private companies had 50,000$ to 75,000$ and higher than 100,000$.
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, 10% of them had the lowest range of salary.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, chart, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • anthropology graduates
  • undergraduate degree
  • part-time work
  • full-time work
  • postgraduate study
  • unemployment
  • career trends
  • employment opportunities
  • flexibility
  • specialization
  • competitive job market
  • salary
  • earning potential
  • private sector
  • government sector
  • freelance work
  • public policy
  • cultural preservation
  • consulting
  • corporate anthropology
  • expertise
  • accrued
  • distribution
  • sector
  • trend
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