News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. what is your opinion about this?

In
this
modern era, it is still essential to keep up with
news
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the news
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, whether on
TV
and
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or
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newspapers
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in newspapers
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.
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they are what keep us up to date with what happened nowadays. These
news
stories on
TV
and in newspapers are very much accompanied by
medias
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,
such
as videos and especially
pictures
. These
pictures
are what help people to portray what is happening on the
news
that
currently
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being highlighted . These
pictures
are
also
being said by people to be more effective than words as they are easier to understand by looking at them. Personally, I agree with
this
statement as I felt the same way when I read the
news
about a badminton match that happened in 2010. Back at the time, a badminton match was held in Indonesia, a match between an
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mixed-pair
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against a Japanese
mixed-pair
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. There was an accident
happened
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in round 2, which results
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an injury for the
Indoesian
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Indonesian
female player. She sprained her right leg ankle mid-match.
As a result
,
this
accident got highlighted by the
TV
news
and the
news
provided
pictures
of the accident. In my opinion, for
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some audiences that need visual
medias
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to imagine things better, it is really helpful for
TV
and newspaper to provide these visual
medias
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media
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on their
news
. These
pictures
also
help to catch the eyes of the
news
consumer as they are more interesting than paragraphs of words. These visual
medias
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are
also
less time-consuming to understand compared to a bunch of paragraphs of words.
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  • irrefutable evidence
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