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Nowaday, a growing nimber of poeple with health peoblem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative develpment?

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It is undeniable that nowadays technology and innovation provide people to have an
alternative
 way of dealing with their own
choice
 of living especially with the health problem. Some may argue that getting the
right
 medicines from an actual doctor is better.
While
 some think that it is
right
 to
use
 an
alternative
 treatment. In the following paragraphs, both views on
this
 topic will be discussed in detail. An
alternative
choice
 now become
option
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 for many people nowadays, as it gives positive factors
such
 as reducing high expenses in terms of hospital service.
Moreover
, it provides an
alternative
choice
 of medicine rather than a single
choice
 from one doctor. It can not deny that the price that will be used in the health programme becomes higher each year. To reducing with those expenses choosing an
alternative
 medical might be
a
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right
choice
.
Although
 an
alternative
 treatment gives
patients
 a space to choose their way of survival.
A
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The
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right
 diagnosis from doctors provides more accuracy in
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 of the detail that they are specialised in, which might be a better idea rather than letting the
patients
 trust their own instinct.
In addition
, doctors can help the
patients
 well care with all the services that will be provided at the hospital, the
patients
 do not have to worry about their other health problems that might emerge from the previous diagnosis. In conclusion, I personally believe that visiting the usual doctor can give positive benefits to the
patients
 rather than letting them choose their own
alternative
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 SYNONYMS different It is important to
use
 synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and
use
 the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score. medicines and treatments.
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