The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart illustrates the world mobile phone
sales
(Samsung
, Apple
, Nokia
, LG
, and ZTE
) in three periods (2009,2011 and 2013).
Overall
, the chart presents an increase in sales
for (Samsung
, Apple
, and ZTE
) while
Nokia
and LG
show a decrease.
Firstly
, in 2009, we can see that the highest sales
in the world from the five brands were Nokia
at around 440, then
Samsung
at almost 230, and around 220 for LG
, 50 for ZTE
, and almost 25 for Apple
. Secondly
, in 2011, there was a rapid rise in sales
of Samsung
and Apple
(at around 320 and 95, respectively), while
ZTE
showed a slight increase. The opposite for Nokia
and LG
shows gradually decreased sales
(almost 420 and 95 respectively). Finally
, in 2013, we can see a jump in Samsung
sales
to 450 and a climb in Apple
sales
to 150, with a slight change in sales
of ZTE
. On the other hand
, a dramatic drop in Nokia
's sales
and a slight fall in LG
's sales
.Submitted by halah.z.alamri on
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