some people believe that professionalsi such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country
Recently,
people
who had professional education have become a popular topic and many Use synonyms
people
think it is worth discussing. Use synonyms
However
, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether professional trainees like doctors and engineers can Linking Words
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wherever they want Use synonyms
such
as abroad or after graduating, they can stay and Linking Words
work
in the same Use synonyms
country
. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that they should Use synonyms
work
no matter where.
There are many reasons why I think. Use synonyms
To begin
with, Linking Words
people
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got
a good education because they have a good career, so they always improve themselves. We know that whole countries give them Wrong verb form
get
to have not
same status, facilities or money. Verb problem
the
For example
, an engineer studies in Turkey, Even if he stays and works in Turkey, he knows that he will not be able to earn money and Linking Words
opportunity
like abroad. For why, a maximum of 15.000TL is earned but the USA give a minimum of 5000 dollars. Another reason is thatFix the agreement mistake
opportunities
,
they often migrate to developed countries to be the best in their field and to learn new things. A good example of Remove the comma
apply
this
is that the doctor goes to the UK because it has very good health services and they have never seen them before.
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On the other hand
, some Linking Words
people
believe that they should stay Use synonyms
to
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in the
work
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country
where they study. Use synonyms
Firstly
, they can help the development of the Linking Words
country
and they contribute to the Use synonyms
country
where Use synonyms
their
study Correct pronoun usage
they
instead
of another Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
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they are in Correct word choice
If
the other
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another
country
and Use synonyms
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also
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apply
country
has some problems, they will Use synonyms
affect
badly. A good example is when a Ukrainian citizen works in Russia Wrong verb form
be affected
then
Russia and Ukraine Linking Words
had
warring. Verb problem
are
Thus
, these Linking Words
peoples
are very badly felt and maybe their psychology breaks down. Fix the agreement mistake
people
In addition
, development is not only important for them but Linking Words
also
is a huge matter for all countries.
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To sum up
, in spite of the fact their Linking Words
work
in their Use synonyms
country
is important for their Use synonyms
country
; they should focus on their own future. Life is their life ,not their Use synonyms
country
.Use synonyms
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