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Topic: The pictures below show how tomato ketchup is made. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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These pictures illustrate how a tomato is produced, and the packaging process it is made. There are 15 stages in the diagram, from picking
tomatoes
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 in the garden to enjoying fast food at home or store.
The first step is
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 that the
tomatoes
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 are picked and the classify
tomatoes
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 as good or bad so that the ketchup is of high standard
tomatoes
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 are continuously delivered to factories where they removed some unnecessary parts included removing stalks, skin, and seeds. After storage in the box,
tomatoes
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 are ground into liquid. At
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 point, seasonings are added.
The next step is
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 that the liquid & is boiled and
then
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 left for about & hours to get the right temperature. It is
then
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 poured into mussels and
labeled
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labelled
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. Before being packed into boxes, the bottles are checked for quality.
Following
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this
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, these boxes are loaded onto lorries, which take them to supermarkets the final step is that you buy a bottle of
tomatoes
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 ketchup, and enjoying with fast food
such
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 as hamburgers & or fries.
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