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The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990

The graph below shows the wheat export of three different areas from 1985 to 1990
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The line graph illustrates the wheat export of three different countries which are Canada , Australia and Europe Community between 1985 to 1990. In general, it is clear from the graph that Canada was the highest trend in 1988 about 25 ,
while
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 Australia was the lowest trend in 1990 about 12. Looking at the graph for more detail,

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Add more linking words.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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