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Some people think that single-sex schools are better than mixed schools. Others believe that mixed-sex schools are the only way for children to learn. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

#people #schools #mixed-sex #children
Beyond doubt , there has been much discussion revolving around
about
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whether co-education
schools
 are good or
gender based
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schools
 are better for learning . From my
prespective
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perspective
, mixed
schools
 are a great way for children to learn . Both viewpoints
along with
 my position
is
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 argued
further
.
To begin
 with , some groups of folks are in
favor
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 of single-sex
schools
 because they think that in
this
 way students can focus on study without being disturbed by
unnecessary
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the unnecessary
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friendship
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 between boys and girls. To add on, inside school eve-teasing can be stopped and girls can learn without any fear .
Moreover
 , a large proportion of
common
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 masses think that studying in mixed
schools
 can make their kids unobedient and indisciplined.
On the other hand
 , some individuals believe that getting
education
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 in co-education
schools
give
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 the educatees exposure to every kind of environment which they have to deal with in their future life. Interacting with
opposite
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 sex helps in brain development
as well as
coginition
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cognition
cognitive
recognition
 power enhancement.
As a result
 , children become more brave and
disciplined
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. A study from a survey shows that learners who get their education from mixed schooling are found more social , reliable and outspoken about social issues.
To conclude
 , I opine that
although
 there may be some merits of
gender specific
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schools
 , the positives of co-education can not be ignored as they help to build stronger, disciplined and valuable human resources.
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