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In large towns and cities, people often know very few of their neighbors. What problems can this cause? What can be done about these problems? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In cities,
people
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 do not know their
neighbours
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.
This
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 problem can cause a
lack
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 of social
skills
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 in
people
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, and they may not be aware of current issues in their town. To tackle the issue, they should make a group where they can socialize with their
neighbours
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. If
people
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don’t
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 know their
neighbours
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, they know nothing about their community.
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, they
lack
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 social
skills
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 because they
don’t
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 communicate with each other.
For example
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, my family doesn’t know many of their
neighbours
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;
therefore
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, they are not close to them.
Consequently
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, they
don’t
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 know many issues about society, leading to a
lack
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 of social
skills
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. When
people
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don’t
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 know who lives right next to them, they can’t acquire social
skills
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 and will be oblivious
about
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 issues within their community. To address these problems, they should make social
gatherings
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because
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gatherings
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. bBecause they can increase their social
skills
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 lity by attending these
gatherings
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.
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 , they have to help
people
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 in need. because are trying to be close to their
neighbours
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.
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, through social
gatherings
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, many individuals can be closed are close to their
neighbours
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 can establish closer relationships with their
neighbours
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.
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, many
people
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 help
people
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 in need, so they can have fun funny and communicate with each other.
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, they should make neighbourhood groups to hang out, and support their
neighbours
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. In conclusion,
people
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 who live in big towns
don’t
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 know their
neighbours
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.
This
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 problem can cause a
lack
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 of social
skills
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society
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in society
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 and awareness about significant social matters. As they make social groups,
and
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they can assist their
neighbours
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.
Although
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 it is hard, try it.
Then
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 they can
solved
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 these problems.

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