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Some believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion

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Homework
 is a piece of work given by teachers to perform at home; some people opine that teachers should not give
homework
 to the
students
,
while
 some are in favour of giving
homework
as
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to improve their academic performance. In my opinion,
homework
 must be given to
students
 for better understanding but not to put pressure on them. Giving
homework
 to
students
 can lead to several circumstances where they find themselves in
hassle
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.
Firstly
, putting extreme academic pressure can have adverse mental effects on pupils.
In addition
 to their school hours, if they are studying more than their body allows, it can give them depression.
For instance
, the
students
 who study more than 12 hours
in
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a day have serious health issues which could not be reversed later on.
Thus
,
seriousness
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 of studies should depend on
student's
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the student's
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 capabilities.
Moreover
, children's leisure plays a vital role in not only their physical but social development. They need to spend
after school
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 hours
to play
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 with friends,
this
 will lead to
their
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better
overall
 growth. Paradoxically, there are many supporters of getting
homework
everyday
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 as
this
 will create
a
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self awareness
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 to improve their academic knowledge. As soon as they build a habit of doing self-study, they will automatically become more efficient in doing any task. The
students
 who do regular study at home tend to have sharp cognitive development which may make them assertive.
Therefore
, in order to achieve consistency in improvement, one needs to do
homework
 regularly. In conclusion,
although
homework
 is important to strengthen the efficacy of a person,
but
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excess of everything has a side effect. For the
overall
 growth, the
students
 must give equal time to
academic
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 and leisure.
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