In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything, they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Digitalized
books
are spreading all over the world. Some argue that in the upcoming
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hard copy
books
will be of nobody’s interest and people will
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the online formats because they would be cheaper. Personally, I agree with
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statement and in
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some reasoning for
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claim will be presented. I believe the sales of printed
books
will drop
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because
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people are more considerate these days. So, as printed
books
require paper which is mostly produced by cutting trees and will damage
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environment, they will be less
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in buying them.
However
, paper is a substance which could be used multiple times by recycling and if there are great recycling plans, it could help these
books
to be sold more. As the internet developed throughout the
last
decades, it saw a great rise in the amount of data available online. So,
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format of
books
is currently available.
Although
they might be published without the
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permission and so it could be against the law.
Nevertheless
, it is of
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great use because everyone could access these
books
around the globe,
In addition
, I think
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books
will gain popularity as a kind of online
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in the near future. In conclusion,
while
there will always be fans
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printed
books
, I think because of
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social awareness people tend to save
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planet, and
also
the fast-evolving internet which could give a lot of individuals the ability to use the
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online, we would most probably experience a world where there are mostly online
books
to read.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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