The bar chart provides information about two kinds of TV shows viewed by male and female audience and 4 different age groups in Australia.

The bar chart provides information about two kinds of TV shows viewed by male and female

audience

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and 4 different age groups in Australia. It can be clearly seen from the chart that the same number of

viewers

aged over 45 enjoy watching both

reality

shows and

game

shows,

while

interest in those varies between men and women. There

are

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about 60

percent

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of male

viewers

that

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prefer

game

shows,

however

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the situation for men watching

reality

shows is noticeably different, having only about 35

percent

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of male

viewers

on its behalf,

while

the rates among women are almost equal for both kinds of TV programs, though

reality

shows tend to attract slightly more women. In terms of 4 age groups,

viewers

aged 16-24 and over 45 are showing

same

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the same

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level of interest

for

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reality

shows and

game

shows, which for the 16-24 group is about 50

percent

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, and for the over 45

group

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is around 70,

whereas

audience between 25 and 34 tend to like

reality

shows more, with its rates in

this

kind of TV shows being 60 and 67

accordingly

and in

game

shows being much lower – just around 38 and 42

accordingly

.