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The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The linear graph illustrates the
number
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 of tourists visiting a Caribbean
island
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 from 2010 to 2017. Calibration of
visitors
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 is done in Millions.
Overall
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,
visitors
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 staying on cruise ships and on
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island
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the island
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 are shown different fluctuations with increases and decreases.
However
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, both are increased
at the end
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 of the time period.
While
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 the total
number
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 of
visitors
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 who visited Caribbean
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island
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islands
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 in the given period dramatically raised.
To begin
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 with, the lower
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 of tourists (0.25
Million
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) stayed on cruise ships in 2010 and it slightly growth approximately 0.25
Million
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 in 2011. Again the same proportion of decline showed in 2012.
Then
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, it began to gradually boost and in the middle of 2015, it crossed the
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 who liked to stay on the
island
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 and almost it became 2
Million
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 in 2017. The
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 of
visitors
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 staying on the
island
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 showed the same amount in 2010 and 2011.
Next,
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it trended to raise to 1.5
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 in 2013 and stayed at the same portion until 2015. In 2016, it provided information 0.5
Million
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 decreases and again grew the same amount in 2017. The total
number
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 of foreigners have visited the Carribean
island
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 accounted for 1
Million
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 in 2010 and it surprisingly experienced an upward trend in 2017 accounting for 3.5
Million
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 foreigners.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, island, visitors, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fluctuating trend
  • initially
  • significant increase
  • slight decline
  • momentary setback
  • steady increase
  • minor fluctuations
  • reaching a peak
  • moderate growth
  • notable growth
  • surge in popularity
  • seasonal or yearly factors
  • stagnation
  • growing appeal
  • visitors worldwide
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