The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The provided map gives data relating to the transformation of the public library’s floor plan in two various times, namely 2 decades ago and now. From an
overall
perspective, numerous new facilities have been added to the central library. It is noteworthy that the
room
which was situated on the northern-west tip of the map has expanded and the foyer has been enlarged removing tables and chairs. Looking at the map meticulously, it can be inferred that a
room
for CDs, videos and computer games has turned into a
room
with 2 sofas to make convenience and comfort during storytelling events and children’s fiction books.
In contrast
, a
room
which was storing children’s books has changed into a lecture
room
. Over the period of 20 years, there was a breakthrough in the technology field.
Therefore
, a computer
room
has replaced a reading
room
which contained newspapers and magazines and self-service machines have been put between the lecture and a café.
Additionally
, adult fiction books and an information desk have been placed beside the self-service machines.
Furthermore
, the enquiry desk has been converted into a café.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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