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We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should be more suspicious of their benefits?

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Now a days
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,
its
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 common to see that
computers
 are used all over
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industries and
computers
 play a vital role in assisting humans to carry out
day-to-day
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the day-to-day
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task
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tasks
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 in an easier, smarter and
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more profecient
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profecient
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proficient
 manner.
However
, overreliance on the computer could lead
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humans to
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disaster
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.
Merits
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 and demerits of dependence on
computers
 are discussed below. On the one hand, In
today
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 fast forwarding world, our economy requires tasks to
carried
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 out in
faster
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a faster
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 and
reliable
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more reliable
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 aspect.
Computers
 are programmed with various software to work in an efficient way without any errors
where as
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 humans might take hours to complete. Even
a complicated calculations
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complicated calculations
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, huge bills can be carried out in a fraction of minutes. Air crafts Navigation system is controlled by
the
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computers
 called Auto-Pilots, Auto-Pilots
workes
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works
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 by taking various feeds from different sensors which is the safer way to navigate. We can list en-numbers of uses of the
computers
For example
, if we want to know the travel time from point A to point B,we can get
extract
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 from the google maps in a fraction of seconds.
On the other hand
,even though
computers
offers
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offer
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wide
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a wide
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 range of benefits to our
blooming
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booming
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 economy but benefits of the
computers
 should not be under overeliance. we can make the best use of the
computers
 under
controlled
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a controlled
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 environment i.e , typically a computer
using
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 in the bank to
monitored
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 carefully as they are involved with
softwares
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software
 and hardware at any point
of
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 time they can furnish errors.
To conclude
,
usage
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the usage
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 of
computers
are
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is
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 beneficial to
the
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human kind
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humankind
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 but overreliance and dependence must
be avoid
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 to
the
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 great extent.
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