It is often said that we should work to live, not live to work. Discuss both points of view and give your own opinion.

It is argued that
people
should
work
to live.It is
an
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necessity to live to earn money by
work
. Some
people
have different
opinion
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opinions
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. for them to live to
work
is their
opinion
.
This
essay will discuss both views and present my
opinion
.
People
should
work
to have
decent
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a decent
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lifestyle.
Whereas
they should not be burdened with
work
always.
Primary
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reason for
work
is to earn money and have financial security.
That is
the reason
people
learn new skills to
work
.
Furthermore
,It will help them in securing financial independence and
decent
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livelihood for their families. Companies have realised
this
and try to balance
work
and home priorities for their employees.
For
instance
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In
India
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,India
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people
work
5 days
week
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a week
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whereas
in
someasian
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some Asian
countries it is
6days
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6 days
a week.
Whereas
few
people
have
opinion
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the opinion
an opinion
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that we should live to
work
. They are of
opinion
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the opinion
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that in order to live we should
work
.
Moreover
In other words
we should be
workaholic
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workaholics
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. Being workaholic means
work
is always
priority
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a priority
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for them and neglect
personal
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their personal
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life. If we follow
this
most
of
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the
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people
will
complaint
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about
imbalance
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the imbalance
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in
personal
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their personal
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and professional life.To cite an example,In
US
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the US
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companies expect employees to be more productive if they are working from home. In conclusion , there should be
balance
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a balance
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between priorities and we should
work
to live .
work
should be
mean
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meant
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for earning
livelihood
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a livelihood
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.
people
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should have priorities regarding
personal
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their personal
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and professional life.I believe that
people
should live to
work
.
This
should
compliment
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complement
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earning livelihood for
better
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a better
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standard of living.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • work-life balance
  • financial stability
  • personal development
  • career advancement
  • fulfillment
  • leisure
  • self-care
  • burnout
  • stress
  • setting boundaries
  • professional success
  • personal satisfaction
  • harmonious balance
  • purpose and structure
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