Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss ofparticular species ofplants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is often argued that the

extinction

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of typical

species

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is the most important problem or

other

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that other

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more serious environmental

problems

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are existing

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exist

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. And I believe that there are more important

problems

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which people have to care about.

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, many people say that the

extinction

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of particular plants or animal

species

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is the most important problem associated with the environment. The loss of typical

species

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will be followed by the

extinction

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of another

species

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.

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, bees are continuously disappearing these days and

also

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many flowers and other plants

start

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have started

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to disappear because the number of bees is decreasing, cannot move honey and flower

seed

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seeds

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well from plant to plant. And

finally

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occurring

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apply

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another

extinction

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again, repeatedly.

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, there are

also

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serious environmental

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according to

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global warming. As Earth’s temperature

is getting

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gets

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hotter, it directly influences people’s

life

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lives

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.

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, the higher

Earth’s

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the Earth’s

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temperature, the more glaciers

are getting

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apply

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melt and

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will be followed by the

sea

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level

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rising

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apply

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. After the

sea

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level

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rises, many small lands will be drowned under the

sea

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and the people who are living there will lose their homes. They should move to another country to keep their life safe.

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, there are many

problems

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generated in the environment including the loss of particular

species

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like bees and the increasing

level

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of the

sea

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,

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however

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however,

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I strongly believe the problem which starts with melting glaciers and rising the

sea

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level

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is as important as the loss of nature

species

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.