Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

The

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comfortable transportation service is

a

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apply

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one of

major

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the major

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requirement

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in the world. It is argued that the majority of people think, the

government

should pay attention to

develop

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railways

more than roads. I strongly agree with

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and the essay would discuss my argument. There are two major reasons why the

railways

should develop. First of all, the main factor is minimizing

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air

pollution

.

In other words

, if people influence to use

train

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the train

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instead

of their private transport,

air

pollution

and fuel wastage can be reduced.

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, in

china

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in 2010, they have developed their railway system and due

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they can be

percentage

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a percentage

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of harmful smoke particles in the

air

.

Hence

, the

government

should think about

pollution

in the environment and make suitable solutions for that. The second reason is quickness and punctuation. The trains are more suitable for

long distance

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journies

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becaise

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because

can be reached

particular

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the particular

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destination

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within a short time period and punctually.

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,

if

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sometime

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railway signal lights go out of

working

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. When, at that time all

trains

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train

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turns are interrupted.

Therefore

, the

government

have a responsibility to enhance the

frequent

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of repairs on

railways

.

To conclude

, I strongly believe that the

government

mainly focus on

railways

rather than

road

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roads

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to avoid

air

pollution

and maintain punctuation.