The graph below shows the average closing prices of selected precious metals from 2013 to 2021.
The line graph presents the average closing prices of specific noble metals between 2013 and 2021.
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that the cost history of the precious metals fluctuated over the given period. While
two of them seen
growth, platinum has experienced a decline in Add a missing verb
have seen
price
.
The price
per oz. of gold and platinum from 2013 to 2015 was approximately 1500, it was relatively higher than palladium, which got a price
of about 800 dollars. It plateaued in
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at
this
level until the next year before experiencing its longest increased
between 2016 and 2011, soaring dramatically to its peak Replace the word
increase
just
over 2400 dollars.
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of just
In contrast
, in 2015 platinum experienced a steady decline about
500 and just hovered
around that level for the remainder of the period. Change preposition
of about
Furthermore
, gold stays relatively stable throughout the period reaching its highest price
in 2021 at around 1800 dollars.Submitted by Anneya
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