The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The data illustrates the changes
of
people who went Change preposition
in
for
global travel Change preposition
on
in
four various years.
Change preposition
over
Overall
, what stands out from the data is that,
the total number of travels increased throughout the given period. Remove the comma
apply
While
, most of the countries
travel has seen growth, America Change noun form
country's
countries'
seen
a decline.
The total number of Add the auxiliary verb
saw
has seen
journey
in 1990 was 448.9 Fix the agreement mistake
journeys
million
. This
figure experienced a steady annual rise to reach an amount of 615.2 million
in 1995. It stays stable at this
range and increased dramatically at its peak and end up at 693.7 million
by 2005.
In 1990 trip
to Europe accounts for the largest portion at about 280 Correct article usage
a trip
million
. The figure witnessed a dramatically
annual ascent at Change the word
dramatic
approoximately
400.2 in 2005 Correct your spelling
approximately
while
, Middle
East has the lowest number at 9.8 Correct article usage
the Middle
million
. However
, it increased steadily throughout the period at least 15 million
in 2005. Asia and Africa depicts
a relatively stable Change the verb form
depict
increased
, Replace the word
increase
whereas
America hovered around the same level at about 100 million
before experiencing a decline of at least 5 million
in 2005.Submitted by Anneya
on
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