The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million
The given data visualize the comparisons of humans which were travelled around the world in 1990 , 1995, 2000 and 2005 on millions.
Overall
, it is irrefutable that in all years the
numbers
raised without decreasing except
America
and Europe depict the highest rate in all years ,
whereas
the
Middle
East shows the lowest rate.
To begin
with, in 1990 Africa visualise 18.2 (million) which is two of the
Middle
East
this
year and in 1995 the number of citizens increased slightly to 20.8 two times bigger than the
Middle
East
this
year.
Moreover
, between 2000 and 2005 the
numbers
slightly increased from 26.9 to 28.7 in Africa , and in the
Middle
East
numbers
raised from 13.5 to 15.8.
Furthermore
, in 1990 the
numbers
depict 80.5 (million) in
America
Asia and the Pacific in 1995 80.3 . What is more , in
America
from 1995 to 2000 there was a little increase from 112.5 to 118.2(million)
while
in Asia
this
shows 80.3 and 117.4 respectively .
However
, there was a little decrease in 2005 in
America
.
Additionally
, from 1990 to 2000 Europe depicts an increase from 280.2, 390.3 and 393.2 respectively
while
in 2005 these
numbers
were 400.2 .
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  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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