The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million
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The given data visualize the comparisons of humans which were travelled around the world in 1990 , 1995, 2000 and 2005 on millions.
Overall
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, it is irrefutable that in all years the
numbers
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raised without decreasing except
America
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and Europe depict the highest rate in all years ,
whereas
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the
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East shows the lowest rate.
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with, in 1990 Africa visualise 18.2 (million) which is two of the
Middle
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East
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year and in 1995 the number of citizens increased slightly to 20.8 two times bigger than the
Middle
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East
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year.
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, between 2000 and 2005 the
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slightly increased from 26.9 to 28.7 in Africa , and in the
Middle
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East
numbers
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raised from 13.5 to 15.8.
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, in 1990 the
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depict 80.5 (million) in
America
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Asia and the Pacific in 1995 80.3 . What is more , in
America
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from 1995 to 2000 there was a little increase from 112.5 to 118.2(million)
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in Asia
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shows 80.3 and 117.4 respectively .
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, there was a little decrease in 2005 in
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.
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, from 1990 to 2000 Europe depicts an increase from 280.2, 390.3 and 393.2 respectively
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in 2005 these
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were 400.2 .
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Vocabulary: Replace the words numbers, america, middle with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "depict" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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