Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The line graph displays how much average changes happened in the

prices

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three

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metals

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in the year 2014.

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, the

three

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metals

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were completely downtrend in

prices

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for the first two quarters

however

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, in quarter four of 2014, all the metal

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moderately increased in percentages.

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, all the metal

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were quite fluctuating throughout the year. At the beginning of the period, Nickel experienced a rapid fall in

price

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till the month of March, even though for the next two months the

price

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did try to push higher but eventually, it failed and from the month of May it rapidly declined by negative in the proportion of

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till June. The other two

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also

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witnessed a drop in

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during the first six months

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Copper metal which never crossed below -1% and by the next

three

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months all the

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reached a plateau. During the Quarter

three

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of the year, Copper was the only metal to sustain in positive number in

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whereas

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, the rest of the

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were below zero.

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, in the month of October, Zinc and Nickel escalated in

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rapidly

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Copper metal drastically rose in

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and by the end of the period all the

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were between the range of 1% to 2%.

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Vocabulary: The word "rapid" was used 3 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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213 words

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