Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Test 1: The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during

 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph displays how much average changes happened in the
prices
of
three
metals
in the year 2014.
Overall
, the
three
metals
were completely downtrend in
prices
for the first two quarters
however
, in quarter four of 2014, all the metal
prices
moderately increased in percentages.
Moreover
, all the metal
prices
were quite fluctuating throughout the year. At the beginning of the period, Nickel experienced a rapid fall in
price
till the month of March, even though for the next two months the
price
did try to push higher but eventually, it failed and from the month of May it rapidly declined by negative in the proportion of
prices
till June. The other two
metals
also
witnessed a drop in
prices
during the first six months
except
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Copper metal which never crossed below -1% and by the next
three
months all the
metals
reached a plateau. During the Quarter
three
of the year, Copper was the only metal to sustain in positive number in
prices
whereas
, the rest of the
metals
were below zero.
Although
, in the month of October, Zinc and Nickel escalated in
price
rapidly
while
Copper metal drastically rose in
price
and by the end of the period all the
metals
were between the range of 1% to 2%.
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