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Currently, many people fail to balance the work with the other parts of lives. What are the reasons and how

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Recently, many
people
 have struggled to make a balance between their personal lives and their work. There are several contributions to
this
 phenomenon,
such
 as high personal expectations from society and
spereading
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spreading
 of technology. To tackle
this
 issue governments should make rules preventing
people
 from
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vital
 labour laws.
In addition
, increase
people
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 awareness of their mental health. Technology is booming more and more ,
this
 leads to
make
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 a load on
employees
 to be in
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continues
 development because they
afried
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afraid
 of being replaced.
For instance
, Ghat Gpt now is working as a university of knowledge it has many
answer
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of
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 our problems in life .
Hence
 , workers are
afried
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afraid
 to be replaced by artificial intelligent s.
Moreover
, high exceptions of society make the
employees
 answer job emails in their spare time.
Therefore
,
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 will have a problem of working for many hours. To address
this
 situation, governments should make rules to prevent
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viable
little
 labour
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laws
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 and limit hours of working per day. To explain, in the Netherlands ,
employees
 are not exceeding working for
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8 hours
 per day.
Additionally
, increasing
employees
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employees'
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awareness of their mental health and
to
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apply
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setting
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a barrier between professional and personal life will
also
 solve
this
 issue.
For example
, Irush
people
 make a separation between their
week ends
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weekends
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 days and their time of work ,
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especially
, teachers there
they
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who
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 are not answering their
students
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during
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the week
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. In conclusion, currently, many
people
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 challenges in balancing
between
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their personal and professional lives, because of,
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decline of
the
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metal heath
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mental health
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 awareness among
employees
 and the wide development of technology.
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