The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table illustrates a comparison between domestic fishing and
fish
importing in Perth, Australia between 2004 and 2014.
overall
. in all years we can see that the local fishermen provided the community with more fish
than the imported ones. Moreover
, the year 2008, witnessed the highest number of local fishing, while
the largest amount of imported fish
was in 2012.
The domestic fishing numbers were rising gradually from 2004 till
2008 with 2677.7 metric Change preposition
to
tons
in the first year and 8136.2 metric tons
in 2008 which is the peak figure, after that the rate of local catches decreased steadily to reach 4271.3 metric tons
in 2012, then
saw a small increase to 5031.9 metric tons
in 2014.
on the other side, the imported fish
decreased from 2004 to 2006 by 154.6 metric tons
. to rose again in 2007 with 830.5 metric tons
, then
the numbers fluctuated in the next 7 years to reach 782.7 at the end
of the given period. Furthermore
, the highest total amount of fish
was in 2009 with 8949 metric tons
, while
the lowest was in the first year with only 3142.2 metric tons
.Submitted by bousaadhazim on
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