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List some of the causes and effect of global warming offer one solution that might help slow or stop the problems associated with global warming

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Global warming is becoming widespread in many parts of the world .
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 essay will examine the
causes
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 the effects and provide various solutions to improve the situation. There are a variety of different
causes
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 for
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 matter .
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 with environmental
pollution
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 .For ,example people are throwing trash every place they come , and many companies discharge toxic substances into the environment that born a
lot
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 of CO2 which make global warming . Another contributing factor to mention is severe deforestation , people cut down too many forests , which
causes
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 the CO2 to be decomposed in less. Unexpectedly, there are some serious effects . The first and most important is serious air
pollution
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 , air
pollution
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causes
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 many problems with breathing , it can make many different diseases. Another effect is the ice melt phenomenon.
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, the ice sheets are melting rapidly and that
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 of natural disasters. The best solution for global warming is to protect and practice the environment.
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, the solution is to decrease the trash in the country , trash is disposed of
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 regulations and planting a
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 of trees to decrease the CO2 in the air. In conclusion , global warming is a big problem that affects a
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 of people nowadays. It's mainly caused by environmental
pollution
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 and severe deforestation. From what has been discussed, the various solution for
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 problem is to protect and increase the environment.
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