Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems

In

this

day and age, more and more contemporary attention has

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on whether the

extinctions

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of precious fauna and flora or other imminent threats like human activities and global warming

result

in environmental problems. In

this

essay, I will examine and explain why I lean toward the latter. On the one hand, it is a common belief that the loss of animals and plants has been a primary environmental cause.

Firstly

, each

species

plays a key role in forming wildlife environments and if some

species

goes extinct, it can show an arise of domino effect.

As a

result

,

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ecosystem

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balance which

originate

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from the decline of

wildlife

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the wildlife

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population

,

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is affecting other

species

and their habitat.

For instance

, predators help to control the number of pests, various

species

contribute to nutrient cycling.

Secondly

, the

destroy

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of biodiversity has

named

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for the loss of life form on earth.

it

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ensures that the distinction of

species

or plants make the environment more vulnerable as it is not affordable and resilient to adapt or to face any changed conditions

such

as climate change, outbreaks, invasive

species

, or diseases.

On the other hand

, I do believe that global warming has serious effects on environmental issues. In fact, global warming has emerged

as a

result

of air pollution in densely populated cities worldwide, stemming from excessive emissions of greenhouse gases and industrial fumes.

As a

result

, it is detrimental to

human’s

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health. Another primary reason is that human activities impacted

on

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other

species

’ life. Nowadays, the more economic

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, the more human exploit in

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of environment. There

are

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variety

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of benefits from cutting

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the tree

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tree

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down to cater

private

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purposes including accommodating population growth, urbanization,

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and resource

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extraction which can provide valuable minerals, fossil fuel and so on.

For example

, deforestation has been identified as one of the key factors that contribute to the severe destruction of plants and animals’ environment and lead to the extinction of some rare animals . In conclusion,

although

some individuals think that the disappearance of some particular wildlife

are

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the main impact on environmental issues, I firmly believe that there are more dangerous problems

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from global warming and human actions at

the

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present.