the diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.
The given map depicts different
parts
of a public library
and the changes that took place during past
2 decades. Correct article usage
the past
Overall
, all parts
of the library
went through total deformation and either were moved to other parts
or eliminated.
To begin
with, Central library
20 years ago was consist
of 7 various Change the verb form
consisted
parts
including, tables and chairs section
right in front of the entrance
, enquiry desk on the right of the entrance
and reading room
on the left. After that, past these sections there were adult fiction
and non-fiction
books
divided into 2 separate parts
on both sides and at the end
there was an entertainment section
and a children’s books
section
.
Today’s plan for Central library
illustrates considerable changes in every part of the library
for example
, the named 2 sections on the left and right of the entrance
are removed in addition
to tables and chairs in front of the entrance
and their place is occupied by computer room
and cafe, adult fiction
books
are now available where it used to be occupied by non-fiction
books
in addition
to self-service machines, in front of this
section
instead
of adult fiction
books
, reference books
are available. Subsequently
, the entertainment room
is now dedicated to storytelling events and children’s fiction
books
and finally
, the children’s part of the library
is now a lecture room
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words parts, library, section, entrance, room, fiction, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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