in many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The soaring trend of

people

’s immigration from suburbs to capitals and megacities is causing a considerable population decrease in suburbs and an increase in the destination location’s population. From my point of view,

this

is a disadvantageous development happening in many countries and there are various reasons supporting my opinion which I will discuss in the subsequent paragraphs. First of all, the migration of

people

who used to live in rural

areas

causes a fall in rural

areas

and an increase in mega cities which can impact social welfare in different aspects,

for example

, the rising number of

people

in a specific place can lead to rising price rate of accommodation because of limited

sources

that can afford to accommodate a certain number of

people

.

In addition

, the lack of other urban facilities can cause problems and misfunctions in the health care system, transportation system and education system of that certain place because urban planning and social policies are based on certain conditions and function in those conditions

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, implying a burden to these systems caused by the unforeseen rise of the population can prevent them from functioning well.

Additionally

, social and legal experts believe that unusual immigration rates from suburbs to urban

areas

can cause a significant crime rate increase. In big cities,

due to

a lack of enough forces to supervise

people

’s interaction, social

sources

and different cultures and ,

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the potential conflicts between citizens can change into actual conflicts between them.

For example

, in my hometown which is well-known for great medical and health care services, the group of

people

who migrated here to obtain

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life quality especially, better treatment quality cause regular conflicts between other

people

due to

different behaviour and

culture

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and sometimes they occupy social

sources

so there are not enough available facilities for citizens.

To sum up

, considering the rising trend of immigration to urban

areas

, I think

due to

limited

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and facilities in the destination which can form a socio-economic crisis and challenges for authorities and citizens,

this

is not a beneficial development because deprives both sides of gaining better life qualities.