News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

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picture

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the picture

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has

essential

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an essential

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role to drill the sense of

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the photographer

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photographer

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others.

Stories

, newspaper,

magazine

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and magazine

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are full of images that

represents

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the real fact of any

topics

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. Some people believe that images can demonstrate everything, but others believe that nothing is louder than

words

to describe the fact. In my

opinion

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both outlooks are quite important. Some people believe that news,

stories

, newspaper or any broadcast should use the power of

pictures

. Based on their views,

picture

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pictures

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are more effective than

words

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consider

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considering

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we have news about

volcano

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volcanoes

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in North Africa, it is not easy to describe everything. So

pictures

are quite helpful to reveal many things about what happing .

Furthermore

, using

picture

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pictures

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helps

writer

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writers

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to write less and help readers to discover. As an illustration, when they want to describe

a rare flowers

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a rare flower

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in North Africa, using

pictures

not only can be so effective but

also

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apply

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show them the

details

of flowers. So based on

proponents

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proponents'

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views of using

pictures

, is that there are some positive impacts

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the audience so

picture

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pictures

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are necessary to drill information. On the flip side of using

pictures

, some believe that

words

are so powerful, they can describe any

details

and it is not necessary to use

pictures

, based on their views English has sufficient

words

to describe many

thing

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details

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detail

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For instance

, there are so many novels with different

stories

, and the

stories

can demonstrate any detail with any

pictures

Also

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words

are quite powerful to move the sense of

writer

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the writer

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to the reader,

for example

, when people read

novel

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a novel

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thy brain create an imaginary

picture

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, based on

detail

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above,

words

are really powerful to demonstrate many

details

. In conclusion, based on

opponents

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opponents'

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and

proponents

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proponents'

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outlooks, it makes a big difference when

words

are coming with

pictures

. They have

positive

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a positive

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impact to drill any

details

to the audience, so it makes sense to use both in a text or news.

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News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older?

These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some nations ,they have the option to import food fr all around the glob. To what extent do you think its benefits outweigh the drawbacks?

At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults,compared with a number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages