News stories on TV and in newspapers are very often accompanied by pictures. Some people say that these pictures are more effective than words. What is your opinion about this?

Nowadays,
picture
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the picture
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has
essential
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role to drill the sense of
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the photographer
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photographer
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to
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others.
Stories
, newspaper,
magazine
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and magazine
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are full of images that
represents
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the real fact of any
topics
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. Some people believe that images can demonstrate everything, but others believe that nothing is louder than
words
to describe the fact. In my
opinion
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both outlooks are quite important. Some people believe that news,
stories
, newspaper or any broadcast should use the power of
pictures
. Based on their views,
picture
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pictures
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are more effective than
words
.
For instance
,
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we have news about
volcano
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volcanoes
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in North Africa, it is not easy to describe everything. So
pictures
are quite helpful to reveal many things about what happing .
Furthermore
, using
picture
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pictures
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helps
writer
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writers
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to write less and help readers to discover. As an illustration, when they want to describe
a rare flowers
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a rare flower
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in North Africa, using
pictures
not only can be so effective but
also
is
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show them the
details
of flowers. So based on
proponents
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proponents'
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views of using
pictures
, is that there are some positive impacts
to
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on
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the audience so
picture
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pictures
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are necessary to drill information. On the flip side of using
pictures
, some believe that
words
are so powerful, they can describe any
details
and it is not necessary to use
pictures
, based on their views English has sufficient
words
to describe many
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things
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in
details
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detail
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.
For instance
, there are so many novels with different
stories
, and the
stories
can demonstrate any detail with any
pictures
.
Also
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words
are quite powerful to move the sense of
writer
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the writer
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to the reader,
for example
, when people read
novel
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thy brain create an imaginary
picture
.
Hence
, based on
detail
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the detail
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above,
words
are really powerful to demonstrate many
details
. In conclusion, based on
opponents
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opponents'
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and
proponents
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outlooks, it makes a big difference when
words
are coming with
pictures
. They have
positive
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a positive
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impact to drill any
details
to the audience, so it makes sense to use both in a text or news.
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