nowadays, a growing number of people with heath poblems are trying alternative medicines
Recently,
people
who had health
problems
used to test alternative
medicines and treatments
rather than go to their regular doctor
have become a popular topic and many people
think it is worth discussing. However
, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether this
behaviour of people
is positive outcomes
or negative outcomes
; they can stay and work in the same country. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that definitely, they have no matter what health
problems
they see the same doctor
.
There are many things why I think so. To begin
with, the doctor
has a career which includes all people
's health
so this
is the doctor
's responsibility. In addition
, some alternative
medicines can result in allergies and harm their health
. Moreover
, it can sometimes even result in death. We should not underestimate the issue of health
. What is more, allergic reactions may damage internal organs. So, doctors know all information about medicament, also
even if doctors did not know the information about medicament, they would make an analysis of blood but we don’t know our blood analysis because of not enough material. Another reason is that a few health
problems
are not thought by our things ,for example
, we are headache but maybe we had a tumour in our brain.
On the other hand
, there are many positive outcomes
to apply alternative
medicine and treatments
. Firstly
, this
solution improves hospitals' unnecessary crowds and they don’t occupy doctors because many people
with ills do not need to go to the hospital. Secondly
, alternative
medicines are more healthful than doctors’ treatments
. Many experts advise people
that whenever they want for problems
apply alternative
medicine such
as, if they are cold, they can drink ginger tea instead
of drugs.
To sum up
, in spite of the fact that alternative
medicine is beneficial for people
, it has negative outcomes
more than positive way. Also
, they have to never use alternative
treatments
which they don’t know.Submitted by ece.ozge on
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