nowadays, a growing number of people with heath poblems are trying alternative medicines

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people

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who had

health

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problems

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used to test

alternative

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medicines and

treatments

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rather than go to their regular

doctor

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have become a popular topic and many

people

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think it is worth discussing.

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, they still have not come to an agreement with each other on whether

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behaviour of

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is positive

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or negative

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; they can stay and work in the same country. Whatever each side of the argument thinks, I strongly agree that definitely, they have no matter what

health

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problems

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they see the same

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. There are many things why I think so.

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with, the

doctor

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has a career which includes all

people

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health

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this

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is the

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's responsibility.

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, some

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medicines can result in allergies and harm their

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, it can sometimes even result in death. We should not underestimate the issue of

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. What is more, allergic reactions may damage internal organs. So, doctors know all information about medicament,

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even if doctors did not know the information about medicament, they would make an analysis of blood but we don’t know our blood analysis because of not enough material. Another reason is that a few

health

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problems

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are not thought by our things ,

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, we are headache but maybe we had a tumour in our brain.

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, there are many positive

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to apply

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medicine and

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Firstly

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this

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solution improves hospitals' unnecessary crowds and they don’t occupy doctors because many

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with ills do not need to go to the hospital.

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alternative

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medicines are more healthful than doctors’

treatments

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. Many experts advise

people

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that whenever they want for

problems

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apply

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medicine

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as, if they are cold, they can drink ginger tea

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of drugs.

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, in spite of the fact that

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medicine is beneficial for

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, it has negative

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more than positive way.

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, they have to never use

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treatments

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which they don’t know.

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nowadays, a growing number of people with heath poblems are trying alternative medicines

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People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why or why not? Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: Describe the vacation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development.