A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her explain how to apply for the job
Hope
this
letter finds you in a
radiant health and the best of spirits.I am writing Remove the article
apply
this
letter with regard to draw
your attention towards the job posting in my organisation.
Wrong verb form
drawing
To begin
with, I know that you are looking for an employment opportunity and I got to know from my manager that we have a vacancy for an activity coordinator at Sunrise of Richmondhill.Moreover
,this
position involves helping the residents of the home with activities such
as playing cards,and games and keeping them busy with outings as well as
parties.
Besides
this
, I think this
role is suitable for you because you have a degree in social work and you were part of the many volunteer camps during our college time.Therefore
, you might be the right candidate with an excellent academic record with this
background.
Lastly
, you can directly come to my office to give your resume to the manager during working hours and also
you can send it to his email ID ,which I will send you with this
letter.Apart from
this
,you can add my reference to your resume,so it will make your chances more strong for this
role.
Please let me know if you require any further
information.
yours sincerely,
ParthkumarSubmitted by pp6859 on
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writing convention
Ensure there are clear spaces after punctuation marks to improve readability. For example: 'Moreover, this position' instead of 'Moreover,this position'.
task achievement
Elaborate a bit more on the application process to provide your friend with more comprehensive guidance.
task achievement
The letter addresses all the points requested in the prompt: details about the job, reasons why it’s suitable, and how to apply for it.
writing convention
The greeting and closing are appropriate and polite, creating a warm and friendly tone.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph focuses on a single idea, maintaining clarity and organization.
The Greeting
Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.
Always start an informal letter in the ways:
- Dear + name
- Hi / Hello + name
‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.
For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:
- Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
- Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.