The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of electricity produced and used among 10 different nations around the world in the year 2014, measured in billions of
kWh
.
Overall
, China and the United States came on top of the list, while
8 remaining countries were relatively similar in figure. Meanwhile, Germany was the only country that consumed more current than the amount they made and Russia had both almost equally.
In the year 2014, the volume of production in China reached 5,398 billion
kWh
and residents used up to 3,866 billion
kWh
, which made the country 1st in the ranking. Followed by China was the US with 4,099 billion
kWh
manufactured, then
3,866 kWh
was utilised. However
the rest of the nations remained just under 1,057 billion
kWh
and the lowest was 485.1 Billion
kWh
in Korea, respectively.
On the other hand
, citizens of Germany had a notably higher usage which amounted to 582.5 billion
kWh
, in comparison to the total supply they manufactured, which was 526.6 billion
kWh
. Finally
, Russia had around less than a 20 billion
kWh
difference between its production and utilisation figures.Submitted by mjdf0930 on
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