The bar chart shows the top ten countires for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and make comparison where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the amount of electricity produced and used among 10 different nations around the world in the year 2014, measured in billions of
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, China and the United States came on top of the list, Linking Words
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8 remaining countries were relatively similar in figure. Meanwhile, Germany was the only country that consumed more current than the amount they made and Russia had both almost equally.
In the year 2014, the volume of production in China reached 5,398 Linking Words
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and residents used up to 3,866 Use synonyms
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, which made the country 1st in the ranking. Followed by China was the US with 4,099 Use synonyms
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3,866 Linking Words
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the rest of the nations remained just under 1,057 Linking Words
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and the lowest was 485.1 Use synonyms
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in Korea, respectively.
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On the other hand
, citizens of Germany had a notably higher usage which amounted to 582.5 Linking Words
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, in comparison to the total supply they manufactured, which was 526.6 Use synonyms
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Finally
, Russia had around less than a 20 Linking Words
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difference between its production and utilisation figures.Use synonyms
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