Practice: You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony. Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter: - Explain that you have completed your studies - Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code - Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for

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Dear Mom and Dad, I am writing

this

letter to deliver the news that you have been looking for: as of today, I am officially a graduate of Ontario Tech University! Yesterday, the final grade for the semester was published on the academy's website, and I finished the program with an average GPA of 3.9 out of 4.3. Since I have 3 tickets to the ceremony, it would be perfect if our family

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in Canada to celebrate my course completion!

Hence

, I would like to invite all of you to attend the graduation ceremony on June 15 ,,2023 at 9 AM. It will be held at the main hall near the Polonsky Drive - Simcoe Street intersection. Regarding the dress code, please wear formal attire with a blue tie and/or blue dress representing the colour of the university. Since we fly from Vietnam, the International Student Office will sponsor the flight ticket and assist us with the paperwork. I am looking forward to seeing you and Tram Anh soon. Yours, Son Nguyen

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task response

Provide more specific details about the event, such as the duration of the ceremony and any special guests or notable speakers.

coherence and cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph is connected logically to the preceding and following paragraphs to improve overall coherence.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

173 words

7.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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