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Some commentators feel that grandparents should live together with their children and grand children, while others say that elderly people should be encouraged to live independently. Consider the possible arguments on both sides of this debate, and reach your own conclusion.

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, I would like to appreciate your kindness, Dr. Tuyen. Thanks for your advice and encouragement. After knowing that your Mandarin speaking skills improved a lot in several years, and the story that you took degrees from different fields, it makes me believe it is possible for me to combine knowledge in nutrition and physical therapy fields and have my own way.
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, the experience of being an intern in
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 put what I learned in college into practice. In the hospital, every time when we face patients and their families, no matter asking
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 their conditions, we need to
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 language and avoided talking too many terms.
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 and interview. It is better to make patients feel relaxed and safe rather than nervous and
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. In conclusion,
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 long-term goals yet, I know the most emerging thing is passing the
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 test. So I set passing the test as a small goal and will deliberate the whole picture of my life continuously.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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